This week my critique partner Jenn sent back chapter 3 of my first Nineveh manuscript with more insightful hints. I’ve been working on it all week, trying to figure out which corrections will make the story better and which don’t fit my voice. It is incredibly helpful but quite time consuming all the same. Oh, I did take a break from this to go over my story climax again. I made sure that all of the elements of a climax were present and I bolstered those segments that I felt were a bit weak.
I promise you a crazed animal, a concussion, and a kiss in every single book...you're welcome!