So much of the revision I’m doing is taking lame awkward sentences and feeble descriptions and attempting to make them snap along nicely on the page. I’ve fixed tons of awful prose…not sure if what I have now is any good, but you can be certain that it is much much better! This week I revised chapters 24, 25, 26, and 27. And I spent a day reading through the chapters that I revised last week. Tweaking them and making sure that as a whole they made sense. I’m over halfway done with this first revision and it feels good to see the progress.