I found more sections that I wrote in second person accidentally. Switched it to first. I researched more trees on a blog about a British tourist who visited the Mayan ruins and was quite descriptive about his findings. And I pushed myself and revised chapters 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, and 23. But they were short fast chapters, so perhaps my great feat of writerly accomplishment is a wee bit overrated, but it still feels good to get the chapters done.