This week I worked on revising Ch. 11 of the first Nineveh manuscript after Jenn’s critique. I’m not quite done with it. Also in response to her critique I wrote three completely new sections of text that showed my main character’s little brother as more annoying and human than I was able to portray before. It added over a thousand words to my story but I think it will make my baby brother character much more realistic and sympathetic.
I promise you a crazed animal, a concussion, and a kiss in every single book...you're welcome!